A Book Review of Black Beauty by Laura
Title – Black Beauty
Author – Anna Sewell
Genre – Story told through a horses eyes.
Favourite Character – Black Beauty because he is the main character and also my favourite tpye of horse
Plot Summary – A horse leaves his home when he is sold to a gentleman who lives in the country. He is sold again and again to masters good and bad
Most exciting event – When the barn Black Beauty is in goes on fire. I like it because it is exciting and thrilling
I recommend this book for all ages because it is told so beautifully
posted by Killermont Primary School Writing Projects @ 4:52 AM
12 comments
12 Comments:
*+*Star*+* We think the book review you wrote is good and short and tells people about the story.
*+*Star*+* We think the book reivew is good and we would want to read the book.
?!Wish!? We don't think you have any wishes for your book reivew!
* We like your piece of writing because you have used lots of good words like thrilling etc
* We thought it was good because you put a lot of information in your piece of writing.
! You could use your punctuation more carefully but good work!
Emma, Chloe and Bili
*Star* You have very good spelling.
*Star* You have good descriptions of things.
?wish? Could you use better openers.
*star* you laid the review out very nicely.
*star* you wrote the review very well.
?wish? could you put in the missing full stops.
*- Good adjectives to describe a horse.
*-you made good use of puncution
Wish -you could have made your work a bit longer
Thank for your compliments. You are very kind!
In Book reviews you don't really use punctation but I will try harder
I don't understand your wish could you explain? Thanks for your Stars
Thank you for your advice I wil take it on board.
I will try and make it a bit longer next time
*+*Star*+* you discribed it very well.
*+*Star*+* you told the review good.
WISH: more FULL STOPS!
Thanks for your comment although I think that I don't need full stops in a book review I think you are right.
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