Snowflake by Adam
Snowflake
Up and up I rise out of the sea.
And join my friends hello Bree.
Then I go down and down.
Phew that was close.
I nearly got hit by a snowball.
So I keep going down and down.
Quick catch me.
I’m about to faaaalllll!!
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posted by Killermont Primary School Writing Projects @ 3:28 AM
1 comments
1 Comments:
star the words were good really really good
star up and up i rise out of the sea was my favourite line
wish you could work on the part that said faaalllll !
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