Thursday, December 07, 2006

Winter By Kate

Winter

Winter is when everyone has fun in the snow, when children make snowmen and snow angels.
When there are snowball fights going on everywhere and it leaves children cheering or crying.
When sports have stopped and every one is bored or stuck inside.
When children go out in the snow and go home to sit by the fire.
When school is boring and you fall asleep when you get home in bed.
When parents can’t go to work and are stuck inside watching TV.
But altogether it’s FUN!

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3 Comments:

At 7:46 AM, Blogger St Flannan's said...

Star:Great detail in the whole poem especilaly the bit where the parents can`t go to work.

Star:I agree with you, sometimes school is boring, so i liked that bit too.

wish:More description please.

 
At 5:59 AM, Blogger St Flannan's said...

Star:i like your description of school and when you said about parents staying in.

Star:very good adjectives and details it is very good.

wish:keep up the good standerd

 
At 2:38 AM, Blogger Killermont Primary School Writing Projects said...

thankyou for the comments but i really do not know what your wish means

 

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