Thursday, October 05, 2006

Introducing Mr. Lutz by Adam


As I walked in the door I was amazed by the sight of Mr. Lutz’s Mansion. Right on front of me was a grand staircase but only it had no wooden hand rails and each step brought you about three centimetres up. To my left was about five doors and they were all numbered up to five. To my right was a large double door that said Mr. Lutz’s Private study. And above me was a chandelier with one strong light bulb.
Just then a man walked down the stairs. When he reached the bottom I saw him in full detail. He had a colourful jolly face and his nose was very long. His eyes were a strange sparkly silver they looked unreal up to his tanned colourful face. He looked around his forty’s and was chubby about the same height as me. He had soft silky brown hair poking from underneath his ugly purple top hat with a very different red suit with black buttons down the middle. On his hands were perfectly white gloves and on his feet were black Italian leather shoes. As I walked in the door I was amazed by the sight of Mr. Lutz’s Mansion. Right on front of me was a grand staircase but only it had no wooden hand rails and each step brought you about three centimetres up. To my left was about five doors and they were all numbered up to five. To my right was a large double door that said Mr. Lutz’s Private study. And above me was a chandelier with one strong light bulb.
Just then a man walked down the stairs. When he reached the bottom I saw him in full detail. He had a colourful jolly face and his nose was very long. His eyes were a strange sparkly silver they looked unreal up to his tanned colourful face. He looked around his forty’s and was chubby about the same height as me. He had soft silky brown hair poking from underneath his ugly purple top hat with a very different red suit with black buttons down the middle. On his hands were perfectly white gloves and on his feet were black Italian leather shoes. As I walked in the door I was amazed by the sight of Mr. Lutz’s Mansion. Right on front of me was a grand staircase but only it had no wooden hand rails and each step brought you about three centimetres up. To my left was about five doors and they were all numbered up to five. To my right was a large double door that said Mr. Lutz’s Private study. And above me was a chandelier with one strong light bulb.
Just then a man walked down the stairs. When he reached the bottom I saw him in full detail. He had a colourful jolly face and his nose was very long. His eyes were a strange sparkly silver they looked unreal up to his tanned colourful face. He looked around his forty’s and was chubby about the same height as me. He had soft silky brown hair poking from underneath his ugly purple top hat with a very different red suit with black buttons down the middle. On his hands were perfectly white gloves and on his feet were black Italian leather shoes. “He- he hello are you Mr. Lutz” I said hesitantly “yeah that’s me alright” he said in a slight Scottish accent. “Well Mr. Lutz can you help me
Sure I can
It’s about my parents because they went missing about two days ago
Heard it on the news I ave
And nobody can find them not even the best detective in the country
You’re wrong I’m the best in the country
So you’ll help me find my parents
Of course I will
Thank you” I said as Mr. Lutz invited me in to his study.

3 Comments:

At 4:05 AM, Blogger St Flannan's said...

stari liked your good description and your realy good pircure and i hored you writed more


star and i liked your good imaginanation and your good words


wish i wish you had of used less full stops


chris

 
At 6:47 AM, Blogger St Flannan's said...

star:I really liked the way you described his strange, sparkly, silver eyes.

star:I love the describing words that you used in the whole story.

wish:you seem to have wrote the story thee times in a row but the whole story is great.

 
At 6:47 AM, Blogger St Flannan's said...

star: i loved the way you described the caractor you put every detail in the story.

star: i liked the hole story apart from on part.

wish the hole story was repeted

rachael

 

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