Snowball Fight by Bruce
Get your ammo in a barrel
There’s going to be a snowball fight
Get to your hiding place quick, before it started
SPLAT, the snowball fight has started
Try not to get hit,
A snowball hit me it has gone right down my shirt, its cold!
Time to get revenge
Yes I hit someone
CRASH, oops I hit a window
RUN!!!
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posted by Killermont Primary School Writing Projects @ 5:42 AM
2 comments
2 Comments:
Star: Great description in the whole thing.
Star:I loved the bit when you hit a window instead of a person.
Wish:More full stops in some bits.
thanks for your coments, i left the full stops out because i thout it was nesesery for that poem.
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