Britain in Winter By Eilidh
Winter is so beautiful with the....
Fireworks as the switch on, of the Christmas lights come to an end.
Ice freezing the children’s toes on Christmas day.
Snow covering the spider’s web on a cold and icy winter’s morning.
Chime bells as midnight strikes on New Years Eve.
Britain is so beautiful in winter.
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posted by Killermont Primary School Writing Projects @ 5:45 AM
4 comments
4 Comments:
*star*:I liked the bit about the spiders web.
*star*:It is very true.
wish:I never got the bit where it say's "Fireworks as the switch on, of the Christmas lights come to an end."
gillian
Star: I liked the detail at the part when the fire works let off
Star:The adjectives were brilliant
Wish:It could be more longer
I like your comments and i will try to make it more understandable.
Thank you for the nice comments and next time I will make it a bit longer.
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